I know a lot of people think Derek is loathesome, and he is, but by god Marcus. Marcus is worse.
it might be interesting to have thrown Jack at the Fendahl.
And so I did! except, I feel I might be doing a disservice to the moral of the story by making Gwen more of a long term victim (basically, Gwen doesn’t fight off the Fendahl as easily as she did on audio and Jack has to get involved) - is there someone who wants to read my rough draft and tell me if I’m victimising Gwen against the spirit of the story?